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Saturday, December 6, 2008

Break Up.....

"It's over", you said with no emotion,
And walked away with the other girl,
Those words slashed my heart like a knife,
And the bleeding was uncontrollable.....

I still remember your false promise,
That your love for me would never change,
You broke your promise, and shattered my dreams,
Left me feeling lonely, shocked and strange.....

I gave up everything for you,
My dreams and my desires,
And you gave me only pain in return,
You set my emotions to fire.....

Am still roaming about,
Trying to collect the ashes,
Still trying to heal my heart,
Full of bruises and scratches.....

This break up has broken me,
Shattered me to a million pieces,
And though I try to act strong,
Deep down, the pain never ceases!!!!

7 comments:

Rajesh said...

These are the words of a BROKEN heart....jus goes to show how deep u loved that X...that was truly an amazing poem...

Kartz said...

Poignant and rich with emotion... I hope it is a third person recital.

Peace.

The Lover said...

I so know what it feels like!! But keep the faith, better things are coming your way! I'm speaking out of experience.

mona said...

@ kartz... it is a definitely a third person recital... it hasnt got anything to do with me.. thanks for all your appreciation...

@ the lover... the poem is hypothetical... i havent suffered a heart-break myself... nonetheless i have felt it long ago myself and even i know how hard it is to pull yourself together...

Priyanka said...

yes yes,.itz 4 meeeee!!!!!!!!!i alwayz knew ud understand me mona

Leo said...

that was brilliant write...
from a 3rd person point of view!! :)

esp. loved the 3rd verse...
nicely written...!!

Rohan said...

People who break someones heart..God makes sure he breaks their back..!!yeah this is out of experience too :P

Your poems flow so freely man..like u wrote it in one good kinds..brilliant :)