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Friday, January 2, 2009

Complicated....


When in my life is happiness dated?,
Oh, I feel so under-rated,
Why am I so ill-fated?,
Life is just so complicated!

Feels like I am tied up with unbreakable ropes,
Into seas of hopelessness, are lost my hopes,
I climb, it's futile, I reach the top,
But I slip, I fall down from life's slopes.....

I come out as ugly-faced,
My true self's hidden, it's encased,
My efforts futile, my life's a waste,
And the truth has such a horrible taste!

I have made a thousand wrong moves,
And I have, but, no excuse,
I could die, I have nothing to lose,
But to fight and live on, I choose!

6 comments:

Kartz said...

Loved the touch of optimism...

Yes, there are times in life where it is best to grab the raging bull by its horns.

Well... Truth... I'll put it as bitter-sweet reality. Reality hurts. Even for [self-proclaimed] realists such as yours truly.

Good 'un...

And thanks for the kind words... Appreciated. :)

Gauisus Novus Annus. Wish you the best in your enterprise.

Peace.

Priyanka said...

very nice one mona darling!! :)
commented on WL too...

wanted to say bout d blog design..its so pretty!! really lovely :)

Sam said...

hey Mona, got a very good blog. Poems are very deep and touching...Keep writing...

Wish u the very best in 2009

Rahul said...

your writing skills can impress anyone...keep brushing it...

Rajesh said...

STUNNING!!!!

Optimistic to the core...

Too good..

btw the blog layout is just TOO GOOD!!!!

ashmar said...

Thoughts of a low self-confidence mind is very beautifully expressed. But the last two sentences gives the motivation to fight it out. Great Stuff