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Monday, October 27, 2008

The flag on the hill....

The storm is raging,
Dark is the sky,
The flag flutters alone on the hill,
Struggling to stay up high,
Life seems to me like this flag,
It takes you to a certain height,
And to stay high up there,
You have to put up a big fight,
All your life you strive,
To go up there,
And then the burden of victory,
Seems difficult to bear,
With success comes responsibility,
Both go hand in hand,
And you've to learn to stand tall,
Wherever you may land,
You have to face all struggle,
And bear all pain and ill,
If you wish to survive,
Like the flag on the hill!!!!

5 comments:

Sandeep Balan said...

wow...first one to comment...hmmmm...yipppeeee....another one of ur gems mona...the fluttering flag resembled the struggles we come across in life so very well...well thought...and better...executed with that signature perfection...the "mona aiyar" style...the greatest achievement for any writer is when you read the first few lines and recognize the writer of that piece...i could do that when i came across ur's on writers lounge...ur style and the way of putting things on paper stands out...nooooo...its not about the predictability of the kind of posts or the kind of topics u choose to cover...its more to do with that punch and those hard hitting lines...u rock gal...hail mona...hail mona...if ever a writers lounge/blogger meet happens in mumbai...i would travel all the way just to meet this gal who weaves magic with her words..cheers!

mona said...

@ sandeep....

you have no idea how happy i am right now... this seriously means a lot to me... its really very sweet of you to appreciate my work... such a comment coming from a writer of your calibre... i m really on cloud no.9!!!...

hope i don't let you down in future... will keep trying to write better and better... and it would be my privilege to meet such an innovative writer like you...!!!

thanks again for all the support and appreciation... keep writing... cheers!!!

Sandeep Balan said...

there are cloud no. 10, 11 and 12 waiting to have you in their midst...am sure future posts would transport you there...he he...will try to catch up with this cracker of a poet sometime soon...mumbai is a small place you see...cheers...

ashwin said...
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ashwin said...

people have said it and i dont need to say it again...but then i cant resist.........
.........EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!